I like her pose, it fills out the space nicely. I can't decide whether one her hands bordering the edge of the canvas is disturbing or not as it pulls the eye there but might have been intentional as it gives the impression that she's about to shut a door or something. The take on her top is also very nice, I'm impressed by how well you've done the folds. The only thing that might be improved would be to perhaps sharpen up the lines on the leg-part of her pants. Compared to the rest it comes across as a little too blurry. Nice job.